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==Wikipedia has a similar article==
==Wikipedia has a similar article==


I believe that I contributed to the WP article. However, I have completely rewritten, reformatted and revised it before porting here to CZ. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 13:26, 2 September 2008 (CDT)
I believe that I contributed to the WP article. However, I have completely rewritten, reformatted and revised it before porting here to CZ. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 13:26, 2 September 2008 (CDT)
==Timings==
I did not see the following edits which I made at about 17.30 UTC. Now I suddenly see them, note the  times! --[[User:Paul Wormer|Paul Wormer]] 17:57, 7 April 2009 (UTC)


== English? ==
==English?==
 
The article states: ''fluid pressure increases above the atmospheric pressure''.  Can one say ''increases above''? I would have written ''increases to a level above''.--[[User:Paul Wormer|Paul Wormer]] 16:32, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
The article states: ''fluid pressure increases above the atmospheric pressure''.  Can one say ''increases above''? I would have written ''increases to a level above''.--[[User:Paul Wormer|Paul Wormer]] 16:26, 7 April 2009 (UTC)


== English? ==
::Paul, I changed the wording to read "becomes higher than the atmospheric pressure as the depth increases". Thanks for your comment and thanks for changing <math>P_i</math> to <math>P</math>. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 18:59, 7 April 2009 (UTC)


The article states: ''fluid pressure increases above the atmospheric pressure''.  Can one say ''increases above''? I would have written ''increases to a level above''.--[[User:Paul Wormer|Paul Wormer]] 16:27, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
== example ==


== English? ==
Would methylchloride not be a better example? The normal boiling point of propane is off the graph. (I hope the timer does not screw up this comment)--[[User:Paul Wormer|Paul Wormer]] 17:42, 7 April 2009 (UTC) PS It took more half an hour before I saw it. And Milt the clock on your talk page says 9:14, while it is 12:05 (CA time) -[[User:Paul Wormer|Paul Wormer]] 18:05, 7 April 2009 (UTC)


The article states: ''fluid pressure increases above the atmospheric pressure''.  Can one say ''increases above''? I would have written ''increases to a level above''.--[[User:Paul Wormer|Paul Wormer]] 16:29, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
:I made the change to methyl chloride as you suggested. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 18:55, 7 April 2009 (UTC)


== English? ==
== Congratulations, everyone, the article has been officially approved! ==


The article states: ''fluid pressure increases above the atmospheric pressure''. Can one say ''increases above''? I would have written ''increases to a level above''.--[[User:Paul Wormer|Paul Wormer]] 16:31, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
You can go to it here: http://en.citizendium.org/wiki/Vapor_pressure [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 04:32, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

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Wikipedia has a similar article

I believe that I contributed to the WP article. However, I have completely rewritten, reformatted and revised it before porting here to CZ. Milton Beychok 13:26, 2 September 2008 (CDT)

Timings

I did not see the following edits which I made at about 17.30 UTC. Now I suddenly see them, note the times! --Paul Wormer 17:57, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

English?

The article states: fluid pressure increases above the atmospheric pressure. Can one say increases above? I would have written increases to a level above.--Paul Wormer 16:32, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

Paul, I changed the wording to read "becomes higher than the atmospheric pressure as the depth increases". Thanks for your comment and thanks for changing to . Milton Beychok 18:59, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

example

Would methylchloride not be a better example? The normal boiling point of propane is off the graph. (I hope the timer does not screw up this comment)--Paul Wormer 17:42, 7 April 2009 (UTC) PS It took more half an hour before I saw it. And Milt the clock on your talk page says 9:14, while it is 12:05 (CA time) -Paul Wormer 18:05, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

I made the change to methyl chloride as you suggested. Milton Beychok 18:55, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

Congratulations, everyone, the article has been officially approved!

You can go to it here: http://en.citizendium.org/wiki/Vapor_pressure Hayford Peirce 04:32, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

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