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:Which particular statements do you think need citations? And which bits are loosely worded?
:Which particular statements do you think need citations? And which bits are loosely worded?
:: I had not intended to start a discussion on citations, and your question suggests that your views on the matter differ from mine. I am content to leave that, and the question of wording,  to the history editors. [[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 18:04, 1 March 2012 (UTC)


:You could always move it to a separate article. [[User:Peter Jackson|Peter Jackson]] 11:13, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
:You could always move it to a separate article. [[User:Peter Jackson|Peter Jackson]] 11:13, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
:: Thanks. I have moved it to [[History of the House of Lords]]. I intend to wikilink it to the present article. [[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 18:04, 1 March 2012 (UTC)

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Law Lords -- a hard phrase to get my tongue around!

I see that they have been moved to a new Supreme Court -- 'Merca comes to Blighty! Hayford Peirce 17:36, 10 October 2009 (UTC)

update

I have updated and simplified this long-neglected article. Comments? Nick Gardner 14:47, 12 February 2012 (UTC)

a clunky phrase

"90 "elected hereditary peers", who have been elected by and from members who had been granted or inherited hereditary peerages granted by monarchs down the ages" really needs to be rewritten. It does, I guess, actually mean something, but it is not very gracefully stated. Hayford Peirce 15:54, 16 February 2012 (UTC)

That's probably because I tried to keep as much as possible of what was already there when I rewrote it. Peter Jackson 16:37, 16 February 2012 (UTC)

History

I think that the paragraph on history adds a lot to the value of the article, but that it would benefit from some vigorous editing. As it stands it lacks citations, is sometimes loosely worded, and is overly detailed to the point where it promises to overbalance the article, even when its other paragraphs have been completed. - Nick Gardner 22:49, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

Which particular statements do you think need citations? And which bits are loosely worded?
I had not intended to start a discussion on citations, and your question suggests that your views on the matter differ from mine. I am content to leave that, and the question of wording, to the history editors. Nick Gardner 18:04, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
You could always move it to a separate article. Peter Jackson 11:13, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
Thanks. I have moved it to History of the House of Lords. I intend to wikilink it to the present article. Nick Gardner 18:04, 1 March 2012 (UTC)