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yes, still needs lots more work, but it's getting better.[[User:Nancy Sculerati MD|Nancy Sculerati MD]] 23:12, 2 November 2006 (CST) | yes, still needs lots more work, but it's getting better.[[User:Nancy Sculerati MD|Nancy Sculerati MD]] 23:12, 2 November 2006 (CST) | ||
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In the first para, is it intended to differentiate molecules from crystals and metals? Probably it is to early in the article to do that clearly. [[User:DavidGoodman|DavidGoodman]] 23:11, 5 November 2006 (CST) | |||
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I changed some words again to what I think is clearer: affinity is 18th century, oxygen is Capital O , not zero, and apparently the familiar html markup works. But I only got to the first paragraph, and i still think it sounds clunky. DavidGoodman 21:42, 2 November 2006 (CST)
yes, still needs lots more work, but it's getting better.Nancy Sculerati MD 23:12, 2 November 2006 (CST)
molecules
In the first para, is it intended to differentiate molecules from crystals and metals? Probably it is to early in the article to do that clearly. DavidGoodman 23:11, 5 November 2006 (CST)