Talk:1944 assassination attempt against Hitler: Difference between revisions

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The whole thing should be scrapped and rewritten from scratch. [[User:John Leach|John]] ([[User talk:John Leach|talk]]) 02:08, 9 March 2024 (CST)
The whole thing should be scrapped and rewritten from scratch. [[User:John Leach|John]] ([[User talk:John Leach|talk]]) 02:08, 9 March 2024 (CST)
:I intend to consolidate all the dozens of articles this wiki now has about Hitler into one article, and this will get folded into there.  Just let it languish for now. I'll add it to my life of those needing consolication.  [[User:Pat Palmer|Pat Palmer]] ([[User talk:Pat Palmer|talk]]) 12:52, 9 March 2024 (CST)

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 Definition:  An assassination and coup attempt principally by senior anti-Nazi German Army officers, in which Hitler was injured and the coup failed [d] [e]
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The quality of writing in this article is so bad that I'd like to SD it, never mind PD. However, it is an important historical topic so we need to improve it by making it readable and ensuring its authenticity. For example, the "Abortive Attempts" piece makes no sense at all and the "multiple plots" opener needs to be qualified.

The whole thing should be scrapped and rewritten from scratch. John (talk) 02:08, 9 March 2024 (CST)

I intend to consolidate all the dozens of articles this wiki now has about Hitler into one article, and this will get folded into there. Just let it languish for now. I'll add it to my life of those needing consolication. Pat Palmer (talk) 12:52, 9 March 2024 (CST)
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