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I would appreciate any review comments about this article by one and all. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 21:49, 18 April 2009 (UTC) | I would appreciate any review comments about this article by one and all. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 21:49, 18 April 2009 (UTC) | ||
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"Mogas" is the general term for gasoline in the U.S. Army; I had always assumed it was some corruption of "military gasoline". Now I know! | |||
I'd consider moving the detailed regional composition material to a subpage, but, at the very least, moving "Properties that determine the performance of gasoline" before those tables -- things like "octane rating" are defined there, but are used in the earlier tables. If you do this, you may want to merge some of the material on "vapor pressure" from the "properties" section into the explanation of effects on air pollution. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 22:22, 18 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
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I would appreciate any review comments about this article by one and all. Milton Beychok 21:49, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
Random comments
"Mogas" is the general term for gasoline in the U.S. Army; I had always assumed it was some corruption of "military gasoline". Now I know!
I'd consider moving the detailed regional composition material to a subpage, but, at the very least, moving "Properties that determine the performance of gasoline" before those tables -- things like "octane rating" are defined there, but are used in the earlier tables. If you do this, you may want to merge some of the material on "vapor pressure" from the "properties" section into the explanation of effects on air pollution. Howard C. Berkowitz 22:22, 18 April 2009 (UTC)