User talk:Milton Beychok/Sandbox: Difference between revisions

Latest revision as of 03:44, 14 April 2011

Good stuff Milton, that will be a useful page. David Finn 08:44, 14 April 2011 (UTC)

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-== Revised lede to incorporate many of the suggestions by Anthony Sebastian. ==
+== Elements ==
-Anthony, I had already considered using the word "portmanteau" to describe "smog" ( as was done in Wikipedia's smog article ) but decided it was too "fancy". Therefore, I chose to describe it as a "combination" word, which is simple and self-explanatory.
+Good stuff Milton, that will be a useful page. [[User:David Finn|David Finn]] 08:44, 14 April 2011 (UTC)
-Other than that, I believe I have incorporated your suggestions in my re-write of the lede while still retaining the technical integrity of the wording. For example, it is not the polluted air that produces the precursors ... they are emitted into the air by vehicles and industrial activities. Thanks much, [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 04:40, 22 August 2010 (UTC)