The Empty House: Revision history

21 March 2024

• curprev 04:3104:31, 21 March 2024‎ John Leach talk contribs‎ m 6,295 bytes −1‎ Text replacement - "counter-intelligence" to "counterintelligence"

21 December 2020

• curprev 10:1310:13, 21 December 2020‎ imported>John Stephenson‎ m 6,296 bytes +6,296‎ rm box

5 September 2020

• curprev 16:4316:43, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,333 bytes +52‎ →‎Reception: put in EM dashes
• curprev 16:4316:43, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,330 bytes +49‎ →‎Reception: guess they should be in blockquotes like my other articles
• curprev 15:5515:55, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,281 bytes −401‎ →‎Plot: okay, that ought to be enough -- but I'll give it a further polishing tomorrow
• curprev 15:5115:51, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,682 bytes +1,356‎ →‎Reception: Kirkus Review
• curprev 15:4715:47, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 5,326 bytes +636‎ →‎Reception: the NYT liked it a lot
• curprev 15:4315:43, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,690 bytes −1‎ →‎Plot: removed a comma
• curprev 15:4215:42, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,691 bytes +1,036‎ →‎Plot: changed a few words
• curprev 15:3915:39, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,689 bytes +764‎ →‎Plot: no sense in relating the plot from one scene to the next, it's not that kind of a book
• curprev 15:3415:34, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,420 bytes +495‎ →‎Plot: filling out the backgroup
• curprev 15:2615:26, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,925 bytes +270‎ →‎Plot: expanding the plot a little but without much detail
• curprev 14:5914:59, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,659 bytes +4‎ →‎Plot: link on Exeter
• curprev 14:1314:13, 5 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,655 bytes +124‎ →‎Plot: minor rewriting

4 September 2020

• curprev 17:2717:27, 4 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,626 bytes +95‎ →‎Plot: broke up the sentence -- enough for today. maybe I can finish it tomorrow and then move on to the next Gilbert book
• curprev 17:2017:20, 4 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,531 bytes +1,042‎ →‎Plot: this is a long sentence, probably needs to be broken up
• curprev 17:1417:14, 4 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,146 bytes +359‎ →‎Plot: changed a word
• curprev 17:1417:14, 4 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,146 bytes +359‎ →‎Plot: beginning to fill in the plot line
• curprev 17:0017:00, 4 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,787 bytes +297‎ trying to move the Author's box around -- well, i guess this is OK
• curprev 10:1510:15, 4 September 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,787 bytes +36‎ added an Authors box at top

26 August 2020

• curprev 19:0919:09, 26 August 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,751 bytes +271‎ rewrote the lede -- you have to read the entire book to see that it is a mixture of many modes of Gilbert's storytelling

25 August 2020

• curprev 20:5720:57, 25 August 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,480 bytes −10‎ →‎Plot: removed "rough" but "dangerous" is the case
• curprev 20:5620:56, 25 August 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,490 bytes +1‎ →‎Plot: returned the "r" to Exmoor
• curprev 20:5520:55, 25 August 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,489 bytes +2,489‎ →‎Plot: removed stuff from Flash Point
• curprev 20:5420:54, 25 August 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,689 bytes +2,689‎ →‎Plot: fiddling
• curprev 20:5020:50, 25 August 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,670 bytes +2,670‎ →‎Plot: where it takes place

24 August 2020

• curprev 19:1219:12, 24 August 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,553 bytes +10‎ a little tweaking of the lede
• curprev 19:1019:10, 24 August 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,571 bytes +28‎ rewrote the lede -- it's much more of a standard espionage thriller than Flash Point

23 August 2020

• curprev 18:1818:18, 23 August 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,543 bytes −132‎ →‎Plot: left some boilerplate in for the moment, I'll start modifying it tomorrow
• curprev 18:1718:17, 23 August 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,675 bytes +2,663‎ began another Gilbert novel
• curprev 17:5717:57, 23 August 2020‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 12 bytes +12‎ New article generated using Special:MetadataForm