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I removed the sentence referring to a joke about George W. Bush as it (1) has only a tacit connection to the subject of the paragraph, (2) references a piece of casual pop-culture in a biography entry on a historical figure, (3) mentions an ongoing event, (4) is not a apparent that it is a "common joke," and (5) it might be interpreted (or misinterpreted) as a non-neutral POV.
I removed the sentence referring to a joke about George W. Bush as it (1) has only a tacit connection to the subject of the paragraph, (2) references a piece of casual pop-culture in a biography entry on a historical figure, (3) mentions an ongoing event, (4) is not a apparent that it is a "common joke," and (5) it might be interpreted (or misinterpreted) as a non-neutral {{acronym}}.
--[[User:David Marcoe|David Marcoe]] 17:51, 7 April 2007 (CDT)
--[[User:David Marcoe|David Marcoe]] 17:51, 7 April 2007 (CDT)

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I removed the sentence referring to a joke about George W. Bush as it (1) has only a tacit connection to the subject of the paragraph, (2) references a piece of casual pop-culture in a biography entry on a historical figure, (3) mentions an ongoing event, (4) is not a apparent that it is a "common joke," and (5) it might be interpreted (or misinterpreted) as a non-neutral — (The Constabulary has removed an initialism here. Please replace this with plain English. ) —. --David Marcoe 17:51, 7 April 2007 (CDT)