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== Arithmetic errors ==
Mary, there is something wrong with your numbers in the "Air pollution" section where you wrote:
*'''The lake also emits an estimated 7,200 tons per day PM 10 ([[particulate matter]] 10 microns or less) or  an estimated 79,2000 tons annually, according to a United States Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) study done between July 2000 through June 2001.'''
(1) 79,2000 tons annually  has an extra zero.  According to page 22 of your reference 7, the correct number reported is 79,200 tons annually.
(2) Dividing the 79, 200 tons annually by 365 days in a year means that the '''average''' daily PM was 217 tons per day.
(3) Again, according to page 22 of your reference, the '''peak''' daily PM was 7,200 tons daily tons .... meaning that was the worst daily amount encountered during the 1-year test period. It was not the average daily amount.
You should revise your above sentence to read:
*'''The lake also emits an estimated daily average of 217 tons per day PM 10 ([[particulate matter]] 10 microns or less) or an estimated 79, 200 ([[particulate matter]] annually, according to a United States Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) study done between July 2000 through June 2001. The peak daily amount of PM 10 emission encountered during the test period was 7,200 tons.'''
As an aside, the 79,200 tons annually is very much less than the 330,000 tons annually that  you reported on the talk page of [[Smog]]. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 17:52, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

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Arithmetic errors

Mary, there is something wrong with your numbers in the "Air pollution" section where you wrote:

  • The lake also emits an estimated 7,200 tons per day PM 10 (particulate matter 10 microns or less) or an estimated 79,2000 tons annually, according to a United States Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) study done between July 2000 through June 2001.

(1) 79,2000 tons annually has an extra zero. According to page 22 of your reference 7, the correct number reported is 79,200 tons annually.

(2) Dividing the 79, 200 tons annually by 365 days in a year means that the average daily PM was 217 tons per day.

(3) Again, according to page 22 of your reference, the peak daily PM was 7,200 tons daily tons .... meaning that was the worst daily amount encountered during the 1-year test period. It was not the average daily amount.

You should revise your above sentence to read:

  • The lake also emits an estimated daily average of 217 tons per day PM 10 (particulate matter 10 microns or less) or an estimated 79, 200 (particulate matter annually, according to a United States Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) study done between July 2000 through June 2001. The peak daily amount of PM 10 emission encountered during the test period was 7,200 tons.

As an aside, the 79,200 tons annually is very much less than the 330,000 tons annually that you reported on the talk page of Smog. Milton Beychok 17:52, 1 February 2011 (UTC)