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:A very good article, but -- and this is no criticism -- it needs to be translated into pure English prose. I will now give it a try. If I am uncertain as to an exact meaning of any particular point, I will leave the line(s) in question untouched. Also, if I inadvertently add to rather than subtract from the ambiguity, I apologize in advance.[[User:Jeffrey Scott Bernstein|Jeffrey Scott Bernstein]] 14:26, 6 March 2008 (CST) | :A very good article, but -- and this is no criticism -- it needs to be translated into pure English prose. I will now give it a try. If I am uncertain as to an exact meaning of any particular point, I will leave the line(s) in question untouched. Also, if I inadvertently add to rather than subtract from the ambiguity, I apologize in advance.[[User:Jeffrey Scott Bernstein|Jeffrey Scott Bernstein]] 14:26, 6 March 2008 (CST) | ||
:Dear Mr Jeffrey Scott Bernstein: | |||
:I am very grateful for their criticisms, which are true, honest and constructive. As we explain to another respectable author, Mr. Todd Coles: | |||
:::''"Regard to article [[Calcidius]], can you investigate and verify as there is no more complete article nor more extended in any other encyclopedia known nor even the most famous - and for pay - like Encarta, nor in the Catholic nor in the encyclopedias known of Philosophy. I led many months of investigation in order to make this article, and yet he had to leave to present a lot of data very interests that are the result of my own discoveries, because it gave my honor word to Mr Sargen, that was not going to use to expose any assumptions Citizendium or discovery that I have made but only to talk of others, and only on the findings of other authors...'' | |||
:::'''''I think the biggest help I need is in the spelling and syntax, as I am Spanish, and I do not have enough experience in the English language.''''' | |||
:Therefore, you have every right to correct my articles to be more correct in the English language. In fact, it is an obligation that we have to have every citizen of Citizendium to help refine the draft, which has increasingly higher quality. And of course, I assure you, and any author or publisher, all my permission honest, and my full appreciation also for any help improve English prose in my articles. I'm sorry, because I may be a nuisance to you, and cause more work for you, for my great defects in the English prose. I hope you understand that I forever lived in country where English is not a language widely used nor even as a second or third language, which makes it very difficult my learning English, and every time I have more years old ... | |||
:Kind Regards, --[[User:Georgeos Díaz-Montexano|Georgeos Díaz-Montexano]] 20:21, 6 March 2008 (CST) | |||
Revision as of 21:21, 6 March 2008
A smaller part of this article was published in Wikipedia in Spanish, with my authorization. But this is the full version, which I authorize for Citizendium. Kind regards, --Georgeos Díaz-Montexano 23:41, 5 March 2008 (CST)
- A very good article, but -- and this is no criticism -- it needs to be translated into pure English prose. I will now give it a try. If I am uncertain as to an exact meaning of any particular point, I will leave the line(s) in question untouched. Also, if I inadvertently add to rather than subtract from the ambiguity, I apologize in advance.Jeffrey Scott Bernstein 14:26, 6 March 2008 (CST)
- Dear Mr Jeffrey Scott Bernstein:
- I am very grateful for their criticisms, which are true, honest and constructive. As we explain to another respectable author, Mr. Todd Coles:
- "Regard to article Calcidius, can you investigate and verify as there is no more complete article nor more extended in any other encyclopedia known nor even the most famous - and for pay - like Encarta, nor in the Catholic nor in the encyclopedias known of Philosophy. I led many months of investigation in order to make this article, and yet he had to leave to present a lot of data very interests that are the result of my own discoveries, because it gave my honor word to Mr Sargen, that was not going to use to expose any assumptions Citizendium or discovery that I have made but only to talk of others, and only on the findings of other authors...
- I think the biggest help I need is in the spelling and syntax, as I am Spanish, and I do not have enough experience in the English language.
- Therefore, you have every right to correct my articles to be more correct in the English language. In fact, it is an obligation that we have to have every citizen of Citizendium to help refine the draft, which has increasingly higher quality. And of course, I assure you, and any author or publisher, all my permission honest, and my full appreciation also for any help improve English prose in my articles. I'm sorry, because I may be a nuisance to you, and cause more work for you, for my great defects in the English prose. I hope you understand that I forever lived in country where English is not a language widely used nor even as a second or third language, which makes it very difficult my learning English, and every time I have more years old ...
- Kind Regards, --Georgeos Díaz-Montexano 20:21, 6 March 2008 (CST)