Pompeii/Approval

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This article has had extensive improvement changes resulting from a long and fruitful dialogue between principal author, Richard Nevell, and a knowledgeable historical and archaeological reviewer, Russell D. Jones. Anthony.Sebastian 03:41, 1 February 2013 (UTC)

The narrative flows smoothly, coherently. Some copy-editing needed. Question for Richard Nevell left on Talk page. Anthony.Sebastian 04:50, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
I am satisfied with the results of the work done by Richard Nevell, including those in response to suggestions by principal reviewer, Russell D. Jones. Anthony.Sebastian 03:45, 11 February 2013 (UTC)