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:I've never even looked at the article -- if it's as bad as you say (and I'm a confirmed liberal), go ahead and fix it up! It's *supposed* to be neutral and even-handed! [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 23:06, 15 July 2009 (UTC) | :I've never even looked at the article -- if it's as bad as you say (and I'm a confirmed liberal), go ahead and fix it up! It's *supposed* to be neutral and even-handed! [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 23:06, 15 July 2009 (UTC) | ||
::From a quick skim, it seems like there's at least some gratuitous rumor-mongering and sensationalism if not outright non-neutrality. For example, the bit about rumors surrounding Trig's parentage and Bristol's pregnancy and the final remark about her poor performance in TV interviews.[[User:Shamira Gelbman|Shamira Gelbman]] 02:06, 16 July 2009 (UTC) | ::From a quick skim, it seems like there's at least some gratuitous rumor-mongering and sensationalism if not outright non-neutrality. For example, the bit about rumors surrounding Trig's parentage and Bristol's pregnancy and the final remark about her poor performance in TV interviews.[[User:Shamira Gelbman|Shamira Gelbman]] 02:06, 16 July 2009 (UTC) | ||
Just to make sure my vision here is understood: I hope to flesh out a lot of this article with sounder sourcing. (The Huffington Post cannot, in my view, be the sole reference for some of these claims...) I am working on this, even if I seem to be tilting the article even further against Palin. The section with political views I want to incorporate partly in a description of her tenure as governor, and partly in the section about her Vice-Presidential campaign (some slight overlap is unavoidable, I think). There should and will be a place for a good number of the more important controversies of her governorship and campaign flubs, but I do hope to put it a little more in context and remove some of the more outlandish claims, even if they were real charges against her (this is an encyclopedic article, not a biography!). [[User:Michel van der Hoek|Michel van der Hoek]] 02:52, 17 July 2009 (UTC) |
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Edit conflicts, ahoy!
Glad to see this article is being edited so fast we are getting edit conflicts. I wish MediaWiki had a decent merge tool. --Tom Morris 10:38, 1 September 2008 (CDT)
- Also nice to avoid the edit wars that afflicted the Wikipedia version. :) John Stephenson 21:11, 2 September 2008 (CDT)
Am I being neutral enough?
Please read through to see if I am being neutral enough for a political articles. I have tried to get her positions on things, but also included some contradictions to those positions. David E. Volk 10:46, 1 September 2008 (CDT)
- You seem to be moving in the appropriate direction (would "right" be non-neutral?"). My initial thought was that many of the descriptions needed to have at least stub links to various terms. When I started to try to insert a few, the link became quite challenging. For example, some people would say, very seriously, that "anti-abortionist" is non-neutral. After thinking about it, we need to have neutral names (e.g., "abortion" is a specific concept, whether one supports it totally, partially, or never). The phrasing, then, should reflect her (and other politicians') position on the neutral name. "opposed to abortion" would be more neutral, to some partisans, than "anti-abortionist".
- "Conservative" is even worse. We do have American conservatism as an article, but, scanning it, while it seems to be decently written, needs either subheads or sub-articles for many of the "litmus tests" (I hate that term. Why not pH or pH meter?) for different constituencies.
- It was even worse in the late sixties and early seventies, but conservatives don't agree on conservatism. For example, an anarcho-libertarian and a religious traditionalist might call themselves conservatives, but think the other is a radical flaming-eyed something. Take some of the (bleagh) litmus tests, such as abortion, gun ownership, religion and government, the nature of marriage, market regulation, public health and safety, and you will find "conservatives" all over the place. It's one of the Republican challenges to unify these voters in supporting McCain-Palin.
- Anyway, the major suggestion I'd make is to be very, very free in creating links, preferably not magenta, to issues, and then state her position in terms of the generic issue definition. It won't be easy. As an aside, I'd suggest that as a general policy for articles on politicians, especially those running for office. There might be an Editorial Council policy there, but I'm not sure I could even draft it yet. Howard C. Berkowitz 11:54, 1 September 2008 (CDT)
- I have to disagree - lots more magenta please. That's what makes Special:Wantedpages work! --Tom Morris 13:38, 1 September 2008 (CDT)
- On reflection, let my face be magenta.
- Seriously, for us to do any serious political articles, we need quite a base of neutral "anchors" for positions. Is the politics workgroup active? It's one of those things that I don't bring up a lot, but I have been sober for a couple of decades of Politicalism. In my younger days, I even was a state-level party research director and am a graduate of one of the parties' senior campaign managment schools, and worked on several campaign staffs.
- If it helps any, I went through the sort of phase, when I was 18, of reading Atlas Shrugged cover to cover, with minimal meals and no sleep. Since then, I am in recovery, once I realized I'd never get a date with Dagny or Dominique.Howard C. Berkowitz 13:44, 1 September 2008 (CDT)
- I think there is a bit of spin in favor of her critics, both in tone and terminology. I have changed the negative term anti-abortion to pro-life, which would be her term.
- Likewise the text says "in favor of constitutional ammendments to deny gay rights" That statement is very much loaded in favor of her critics. I've left it alone for now, but it needs a neutral statement. She would say that gays already have the same rights any other citizen has, unless one introduces a novel definition of marriage, so they would refer to their opposition to "special rights" for homosexuals. David L Green 22:22, 1 September 2008 (CDT)
- I'm afraid I don't consider "pro-life" to be an especially neutral. Abortion is a specific procedure. A neutral phrasing is that one is for or against treating abortion as a medical procedure, to be performed upon agreement of a patient and an appropriately licensed clinician. Several excellent gynecologists I know come to mind, who have made the personal choice that they will not perform abortions. If one of their patients asks to have one done, they will, however, refer her to a gynecologist that they will perform the procedure by generally accepted standards of proper performance of the procedure.
- If you want to give a specific quote of her saying she was "pro-life", indeed that would be accurate reporting of what she said. I don't consider either anti-abortion or pro-life to be especially neutral terms, but, if forced to choose, I consider anti-abortion to be far more neutral. There is no question if an abortion procedure is or is not done. There is considerable disagreement about whether an abortion ends a human life, a disagreement that will not be solved here. Howard C. Berkowitz 22:41, 1 September 2008 (CDT)
- Still, the term "anti-abortion" is one that's almost universally used by her critics. So, in this context, it's very much a spin in favor of them. There has to be a more truly neutral way to express it than anti-abortion. David L Green 23:06, 1 September 2008 (CDT)
- Here's a perfectly illustrative case where we can find a precisely neutral formulation: use both, since the position needs to be described only once. Arguing whether "pro-life" or "anti-abortion" is more "neutral" is entirely to misunderstanding the CZ meaning of "neutral": if a significant number of the other side doesn't like the term, it's not neutral. --Larry Sanger 15:33, 5 September 2008 (CDT)
- I considered changing anti-abortion to pro-life, but I find pro-life misleading and ambiguous in this regard. Many "pro-life" people are also in favor of bombing the hell out of people and killing convicted murderers and rapists, which is not really a "pro-life" stance, while pro/anti-abortion is very specific. Ghandi was pro-life, but most so-called pro-life people in the U.S. are really just anti-abortion. As far as "gay rights" are concerned I have to agree that they already have the same rights as everyone else except for the spouse-related benefits. I feel the same way about hate crimes: not needed. If someone bashed my head in with a shovel, I don't really care what his motivation was.
- All in how it's spun. A pro-life pastor in a mainline denomination told me that in his younger years he was against capital punishment. But he said he came to see over the years that there is no deeper way to show respect for life than to execute those who take innocent life. David L Green 21:42, 2 September 2008 (CDT)
- As for the statement that she is "in favor of denying gay rights", that is exactly what her supporters want to hear and her detractors hate to hear. So both sides are satisfied and the statement is true, not biased either way.
David E. Volk 23:10, 1 September 2008 (CDT)
- Not really. Her supporters would say she is against giving "special rights" to homosexuals. David L Green 21:42, 2 September 2008 (CDT)
- BTW, the same arguments might be made about pro-abortionists, who would state that no one likes abortion, they are really pro-"legal right to have an aborion"-ists. I guess "pro-choice" is the liberal euphemism and "pro-life" is the conservative euphemism. David E. Volk 23:13, 1 September 2008 (CDT)
- Agreeing that all is euphemism might be a useful point. Seriously, there are any number of medical procedures to which one might object, without getting into nuances on the nature of life -- except at both ends of the spectrum. I am intensely opposed to prescribing antibiotics on demand. While the standards have changed, prescribing long-term opioid therapy for a non-terminal patient, regardless of the presence of chronic pain, was often illegal. Howard C. Berkowitz 23:20, 1 September 2008 (CDT)
Why the hypotheticals?
Rather than guessing what her supporters and detractors would say, why not use direct quotes rather than getting into an abortion debate that has never been settled on the Internet, and will never be? Even better, quote her rather than supporters, although it might be appropriate to cite responses to her position.
Could we try to stop the hypotheticals about what people might say, and focus on what people have said? Howard C. Berkowitz 21:49, 2 September 2008 (CDT)
- Not too much yet, but there certainly will be plenty of quotes in the coming days. And don't misunderstand me. Criticisms are an appropriate part of a neutral article. Normally one would allow her to make her own case before stating criticisms. When the article itself is couched in the terminology and thought patterns of the critics, it's not neutral. David L Green 23:03, 2 September 2008 (CDT)
- Please look at the references that I added, and you will see that I am, in fact, using her words from various public interviews and addresses. David E. Volk 15:07, 3 September 2008 (CDT)
- I don't think there should be much of a problem with 'pro-life', providing its non-neutral context is clear: it means 'anti-abortion with strong right-wing overtones', just as 'ethnic cleansing', originally a euphemism, is now synonymous with 'genocide'. Ro Thorpe 18:40, 5 September 2008 (CDT)
Apropos of absolutely nothing...
She graduated from a high school about 50 miles north of where I graduated from high school (Service High, in Anchorage), four years earlier than me. Same year as my older brother. Bizarre. --Larry Sanger 00:08, 3 September 2008 (CDT)
- Or, as they say in French, "Bizarre, bizarre". Personally, I'm rooting for the old Johnny Horton songs, "When It's Springtime in Alaska (It's Forty Below)" and "North to Alaska".... Hayford Peirce 00:13, 3 September 2008 (CDT)
Purely editorial cringe
Could CZ abuse the English language a bit less than the mass media, and have a "gategate" policy? Nothing is called a "gate" unless it is a mechanical entry point in a barrier, or a particular circuit in digital logic.
Howard C. Berkowitz 17:36, 5 September 2008 (CDT)
- Palpably false, Howard! Would you try to write an article about the late, unlamented Richard M. Nixon with no mention of Watergate? (I admit that I sympathize with your plaint about this grossly over-worked word, but if the Mass Media use it to describe certain events, so must we....) Hayford Peirce 18:06, 5 September 2008 (CDT)
- Ah. But "Watergate" is a proper name directly associated with the events.
- Well, yeah, that's all I'm saying. We've got Watergate, we've got Troopergate (wasn't there an earlier one of the same name with Bill Clinton?), and various other Gates over the years that the Media and/or politicians have played around with. Those are the ones we have to report. If you're saying that we shouldn't, on these talk pages, start making up our own, such as, to pull one out of the ether, Richard-JensenGate, then I entirely agree with you.... Hayford Peirce 18:18, 5 September 2008 (CDT)
- This talk page does seem to be picking up some good-natured anecdotes. It happened that as Gerald Ford was being sworn in, as I listened to the ceremony, I was driving past the Watergate. Not often reported was the Chief Justice muttering, after declaring Ford the President, "it worked. the system worked.". Howard C. Berkowitz 18:10, 5 September 2008 (CDT)
- Was it the C.J.? It seems to me that a gazillion people used it after Ford took office. Including Ford himself, no? Memory dims.... Hayford Peirce 18:18, 5 September 2008 (CDT)
- This talk page does seem to be picking up some good-natured anecdotes. It happened that as Gerald Ford was being sworn in, as I listened to the ceremony, I was driving past the Watergate. Not often reported was the Chief Justice muttering, after declaring Ford the President, "it worked. the system worked.". Howard C. Berkowitz 18:10, 5 September 2008 (CDT)
Apparently you are refering to zipper-gate (Clinton) and tripper gate (Ford). David E. Volk 21:53, 5 September 2008 (CDT)
Neutrality?? (Again)
I'll admit outright that I am a conservative and was attending the Republican convention in St. Paul when most of this article seems to have been written, though I am not a member of the Republican Party and have never really been too impressed with Mrs. Palin. But that does not disqualify me from being disappointed by the pervasive anti-Palin tone that can be found in practically every paragraph of this article. Come on, is this the closest one can come to neutrality on CZ? This article includes every rumor about Palin that was ever dredged up, without serious critical discussion, and often included in tendentious sentences that put her in the worst possible light as a flake and a hypocrite. It seems the article was soon abandoned after McCain and Palin lost the election, leaving the article in a deplorable state. It is only because I consider this article be in such an embryonic state of development that I have taken the liberty of moving things around, updating things majorly and rewriting some sections in an initial attempt to bring this article up to par. Michel van der Hoek 22:28, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
- I've never even looked at the article -- if it's as bad as you say (and I'm a confirmed liberal), go ahead and fix it up! It's *supposed* to be neutral and even-handed! Hayford Peirce 23:06, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
- From a quick skim, it seems like there's at least some gratuitous rumor-mongering and sensationalism if not outright non-neutrality. For example, the bit about rumors surrounding Trig's parentage and Bristol's pregnancy and the final remark about her poor performance in TV interviews.Shamira Gelbman 02:06, 16 July 2009 (UTC)
Just to make sure my vision here is understood: I hope to flesh out a lot of this article with sounder sourcing. (The Huffington Post cannot, in my view, be the sole reference for some of these claims...) I am working on this, even if I seem to be tilting the article even further against Palin. The section with political views I want to incorporate partly in a description of her tenure as governor, and partly in the section about her Vice-Presidential campaign (some slight overlap is unavoidable, I think). There should and will be a place for a good number of the more important controversies of her governorship and campaign flubs, but I do hope to put it a little more in context and remove some of the more outlandish claims, even if they were real charges against her (this is an encyclopedic article, not a biography!). Michel van der Hoek 02:52, 17 July 2009 (UTC)