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This, and [[Parkinsonian disorders]], are some tests at replacing the MeSH definition as the lede with something less technical, usually citing a patient information site. In the /Definition page, I'm putting a MeSH-derived definition, but usually not the full definition there, and making sure it's fully wikilinked. The full MeSH definition, however, seems to work well in the more technical discussion of the disease. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 20:43, 26 June 2010 (UTC)
This, and [[Parkinsonian disorder]], are some tests at replacing the MeSH definition as the lede with something less technical, usually citing a patient information site. In the /Definition page, I'm putting a MeSH-derived definition, but usually not the full definition there, and making sure it's fully wikilinked. The full MeSH definition, however, seems to work well in the more technical discussion of the disease. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 20:43, 26 June 2010 (UTC)

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 Definition:  Degenerative disorder of the central nervous system. [d] [e]
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This, and Parkinsonian disorder, are some tests at replacing the MeSH definition as the lede with something less technical, usually citing a patient information site. In the /Definition page, I'm putting a MeSH-derived definition, but usually not the full definition there, and making sure it's fully wikilinked. The full MeSH definition, however, seems to work well in the more technical discussion of the disease. Howard C. Berkowitz 20:43, 26 June 2010 (UTC)

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