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Russell has sure done a lot of work on the original, but even so it is still badly organized -- it reads the way novelists write novels if they want to use flashbacks, etc.  This is not, in my opinion, how a history article should be written. Thanks, Russell, for trying to work on it!  (I looked at it myself several months ago and threw up my hands in despair.) [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 23:01, 16 August 2011 (UTC)
Russell has sure done a lot of work on the original, but even so it is still badly organized -- it reads the way novelists write novels if they want to use flashbacks, etc.  This is not, in my opinion, how a history article should be written. Thanks, Russell, for trying to work on it!  (I looked at it myself several months ago and threw up my hands in despair.) [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 23:01, 16 August 2011 (UTC)
:I agree.  I don't usually contribute to this kind of article, but I felt like I ''had'' to do something with the lede.  I'm glad someone who knows what's going on is around to straighten things out.  Thanks, Russell. -[[User:Joe Quick|Joe Quick]] 23:43, 16 August 2011 (UTC)

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 Definition:  Secret bilateral talks between the U.S. and North Vietnam (1969-1973) to end U.S. involvement in the Vietnam War, resulting in the Paris Accords signed on January 28, 1973. [d] [e]
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Russell has sure done a lot of work on the original, but even so it is still badly organized -- it reads the way novelists write novels if they want to use flashbacks, etc. This is not, in my opinion, how a history article should be written. Thanks, Russell, for trying to work on it! (I looked at it myself several months ago and threw up my hands in despair.) Hayford Peirce 23:01, 16 August 2011 (UTC)

I agree. I don't usually contribute to this kind of article, but I felt like I had to do something with the lede. I'm glad someone who knows what's going on is around to straighten things out. Thanks, Russell. -Joe Quick 23:43, 16 August 2011 (UTC)
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