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In its current form, this article is very difficult to understand. I would recommend writing to make it more accessible. --[[User:Peter A. Lipson|Peter A. Lipson]] 14:09, 1 May 2007 (CDT) | In its current form, this article is very difficult to understand. I would recommend writing to make it more accessible. --[[User:Peter A. Lipson|Peter A. Lipson]] 14:09, 1 May 2007 (CDT) | ||
: I've rewritten what I think you might be referring to, but please post more comments if you would like. I've tried to present the reason why Hubbard called it "a study of knowledge". I've tried to be specific about what he was talking about re:knowledge, as specifically as possible. [[User:Terry E. Olsen|Terry E. Olsen]] 18:16, 1 May 2007 (CDT) | |||
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In its current form, this article is very difficult to understand. I would recommend writing to make it more accessible. --Peter A. Lipson 14:09, 1 May 2007 (CDT)
- I've rewritten what I think you might be referring to, but please post more comments if you would like. I've tried to present the reason why Hubbard called it "a study of knowledge". I've tried to be specific about what he was talking about re:knowledge, as specifically as possible. Terry E. Olsen 18:16, 1 May 2007 (CDT)