CZ Talk:Request Approved Article Copyedit/Archive 1

CZ Talk:Request Approved Article Copyedit

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• Theodor Lohmann - there should be a space before Diakonie in the last line of the first paragraph. John Stephenson 00:23, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Done. John Stephenson 21:05, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

• Alcmaeon of Croton - typo at the end of the first paragraph (comma to full stop). John Stephenson 14:54, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Done. John Stephenson 21:05, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

• Two typos in the Neighbourhood (topology) article. John Stephenson 14:44, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
  • Done. John Stephenson 21:05, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

• Great Siege of Scarborough Castle - this one's my error: in the 'background' section on the last line, there's an extra 'the' that should be deleted. Thanks! John Stephenson 06:49, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
  • Done. Thanks! John Stephenson 21:05, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

• Don't know if this is strictly the place for this request, but [[Category:Healing Arts Workgroup]] and [[Category:CZ Live]] should be removed from the end of the approved Chiropractic article. John Stephenson 06:49, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
  • Done. John Stephenson 21:05, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

• Led Zeppelin - in the introduction: Jimmy Page was born in 1944, not 1946, as corrected on the draft. Correct date is stated on the Page article. This error has been spotted. John Stephenson 02:54, 24 November 2010 (UTC)

Corrected by Matt. John Stephenson 07:26, 24 November 2010 (UTC)

I notified Matt of the error earlier this year but he refused to change it claiming only a music editor could do it. Meg Ireland 11:23, 24 November 2010 (UTC)

• Anti-Saloon League - needs Wikipedia checkbox ticking. John Stephenson 10:26, 7 July 2010 (UTC)
  • Done. If you get a chance, check other User:Richard Jensen imports, please. D. Matt Innis 00:13, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

• Industrial_Revolution/Draft - numerous links added, plus a few copyedit type corrections (spelling, redundant word, etc) added by myself and 2 others. I will be expanding the "Social impact" section and would like these technical corrections entered separately before beginning that work. James F. Perry 14:22, 16 April 2010 (UTC)

• Civil society
  • Done D. Matt Innis 02:46, 8 February 2010 (UTC)

• Literature (WP "approved error")
  • Unless I'm missing something, I fixed that one in December I think D. Matt Innis 01:14, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

On the WP list it is listed as open. Sorry, I did not check the page. Peter Schmitt 01:27, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

• Frederick Twort (WP "approved error")
  • Needs more consideration. "...discovered that bacteriophages are viruses that attack and destroy bacteria." Twort likely discovered that certain viruses destroyed bacteria. It is not obvious to me whether he coined the term "bacteriophage" or whether this came later. I don't feel comfortable giving him this credit without more information. An editor would be great as this does have an element of content reform. D. Matt Innis 01:09, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

I think you got this wrong. Neither sentence claims that he coined the word. It is only not the best English: "he discovered in b. the" means that he indentified b. to be v. and as the cause of . But Daniel would fit as an editor. Peter Schmitt 01:27, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

Certainly appreciate your thoughts. I've responded on the talk page. Chris, maybe you can help as well. D. Matt Innis 04:01, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

• Terrorism Error located on main article, not on Draft page: illegaly -> illegally
  • Done D. Matt Innis 01:04, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

• Demographic transition
  • Done, Chris Day 03:05, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

• John Franklin
  • Done. D. Matt Innis 04:27, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

• Contraception (medical methods) Error located on main article, not on Draft page: knowlege -> knowledge
• Orchid
• DNA
• Drugs banned from the Olympics
• Contraception (medical methods)
• International economics
  • Done group above Chris Day

• MediaWiki:Licenses Protien -> Protein
  • Done.D. Matt Innis 21:33, 12 February 2010 (UTC)
• Orchid
  • Done.D. Matt Innis 21:33, 12 February 2010 (UTC)

• Tux
• Dokdo
• Crystal Palace
  • Done above three. Chris Day

• MediaWiki API retured -> returned
  • Not accessible with SYSOP rights D. Matt Innis 00:43, 16 February 2010 (UTC)

• Chemical engineering Done by Hayford Peirce
• Complex number
• Bacteriophage Suprising -> Surprising. Error located on main article not Draft.
• NMR spectroscopy
• John Franklin
• Contraception (medical methods) witholding -> withholding. Error located on main article not Draft.
  • Finished through to this point. D. Matt Innis 00:43, 16 February 2010 (UTC)

• Augustin-Louis Cauchy
• James Clerk Maxwell
• Michael Faraday
• Homeopathy
• Randomized controlled trial
  • Got these. D. Matt Innis 01:13, 19 February 2010 (UTC)

These are some corrections I made yesterday to the draft versions of Approved articles after I "discovered" that the Firefox browser had a spell checker:

• Ammonia production : Corrected spelling of "quantity"
• Compressibility factor (gases) : Corrected spelling of "acentric"
• Amine gas treating : Changed [[mercaptans]] to [[mercaptan]]s
• Natural gas: Corrected spelling of "underground"
• Vacuum distillation : Corrected spelling of "laboratory"
• Relative volatility: Corrected spelling of "volatility" in a section header
• Ideal gas law : Corrected spelling of "Helmholtz"
• Air pollution dispersion terminology : Corrected spelling of "stability"
• U.S. Environmental Protection Agency : Corrected spelling of "Emergency"
• I made some very minor rewording of one small paragraph in Ammonia production/draft. Could you also change that? If not, then it needs an editor to nominate it for re-approval. Milton Beychok 02:20, 19 February 2010 (UTC)
• Terrorism A number of minor spelling corrections added. (none of these were present in the protected version)
• Literature

I copyedited all the ones above from Ammonia production to Literature. Chris Day 20:27, 4 March 2010 (UTC)

• The draft version of the Approved Bar (unit) article now has this added to its edit page {{dambigbox|text=This article is about Bar, a unit of [[pressure]]. For other usages, see [[Bar (disambiguation)]].}} because there is now disambiguation page for the word "bar". Thus, the Approved Bar (unit) also needs the same {{dambigbox}} template. Milton Beychok 00:51, 20 February 2010 (UTC)

Milt, I left this one above for now. I have forgetten what the disambiguation protocol is right now. Chris Day 20:27, 4 March 2010 (UTC)